tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8373769128375739503.post2447788067836665646..comments2023-06-01T05:58:51.997-07:00Comments on Editing (MM422): Regina's Edit: Headline: GMOs continue to raise questionsRegina Cassellhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04060298634467517339noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8373769128375739503.post-58711632453093356072016-12-09T10:05:16.970-08:002016-12-09T10:05:16.970-08:00I agree with you Lisa, since the topic seems to be...I agree with you Lisa, since the topic seems to be the seminar itself, the lede and nutgraph should reflect that. Having said that, and having attended said seminar, it was very informative (the seminar) and I was glad to have attended. :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04754910471556343015noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8373769128375739503.post-91319803766835982892016-11-10T09:41:01.634-08:002016-11-10T09:41:01.634-08:00I love the concept of this article - it is very in...I love the concept of this article - it is very informative. Make sure to mention that these seminars have been taking place within the first paragraph to alert the audience to what the article is really about. Also, I would love to know a bit more about GMO's themselves in a small blurb towards the beginning of the article.Lisa.Herdmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16132688536333241290noreply@blogger.com