tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8373769128375739503.post6987381702171565658..comments2023-06-01T05:58:51.997-07:00Comments on Editing (MM422): Theatre students ready for London journeyRegina Cassellhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04060298634467517339noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8373769128375739503.post-67835724493025106162015-12-03T19:51:00.689-08:002015-12-03T19:51:00.689-08:00Great article! One thing at the beginning, "e...Great article! One thing at the beginning, "exploring the streets of London..." is probably better!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00539629333194858609noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8373769128375739503.post-68695621264590229852015-12-01T10:03:52.773-08:002015-12-01T10:03:52.773-08:00If I could change anything about my college experi...If I could change anything about my college experience, it would be to study abroad. I think it is a great opportunity for students to be able to see and experience the world before they get settled into their careers. It is nice to see Washburn supporting students to be taken out of their comfort zone and truly experience the world. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03491079946480679001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8373769128375739503.post-63747886527737878032015-11-30T21:23:54.592-08:002015-11-30T21:23:54.592-08:00I agree with Justin, the format of this article is...I agree with Justin, the format of this article is hard to read. I like the quotes that were used in the article! Great job!Michaela Olberdinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07004288344085279295noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8373769128375739503.post-75081987182878689282015-11-30T19:16:06.619-08:002015-11-30T19:16:06.619-08:00I think the formatting could be changes so that it...I think the formatting could be changes so that it is easier to read. Maybe put some spaces in it. Its a lot all at once.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04156632950972041591noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8373769128375739503.post-1625568663453988642015-11-30T08:03:47.454-08:002015-11-30T08:03:47.454-08:00This was a great topic to write about. Good topic ...This was a great topic to write about. Good topic research and selection. Trevinedelmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00644014434071085284noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8373769128375739503.post-25477224755751593622015-11-30T07:44:34.317-08:002015-11-30T07:44:34.317-08:00I really like the format of your article. Great jo...I really like the format of your article. Great job!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07420193873114415751noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8373769128375739503.post-64022171752555129252015-11-27T20:31:18.079-08:002015-11-27T20:31:18.079-08:00Good article! I like itGood article! I like itAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08986458704170497564noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8373769128375739503.post-11145992882051035122015-11-25T09:16:51.586-08:002015-11-25T09:16:51.586-08:00Had fun reading this article. Had fun reading this article. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11693627680739888458noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8373769128375739503.post-83260957370099237282015-11-23T18:12:31.348-08:002015-11-23T18:12:31.348-08:00The trip's itinerary is unable to be fully det... The trip's itinerary is unable to be fully determined until the number of students is confirmed. I would try and reword this sentence... maybe, The itinerary is not finalized until the number of students participating is confirmed. <br /><br />I like reading your posts because they are always well written and require little editing. Cathryne Klisehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07156237965938779149noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8373769128375739503.post-53696933178498754142015-11-22T23:33:46.237-08:002015-11-22T23:33:46.237-08:00Love this article, Amy! This was a very interestin...Love this article, Amy! This was a very interesting read. I'm glad you wrote about it, because most people aren't aware of some of the great things that Washburn has to offer. I like that you added quotes into the article. It definitely makes it more personable giving testimonies. Great job!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00546756473875671715noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8373769128375739503.post-28662859410185750992015-11-22T15:58:54.222-08:002015-11-22T15:58:54.222-08:00Great job, Amy! Very information article about the...Great job, Amy! Very information article about the trip! Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08981167437803624417noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8373769128375739503.post-22940699707876127372015-11-22T05:44:26.612-08:002015-11-22T05:44:26.612-08:00Nice artice. In the first paragraph change "o...Nice artice. In the first paragraph change "on" to "of." I would also say "The last London trip was May 18 and lasted for 10 days."Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18105774946599752560noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8373769128375739503.post-62110758764338750782015-11-19T15:14:57.827-08:002015-11-19T15:14:57.827-08:00Well written article. I think it is so cool for st...Well written article. I think it is so cool for students to have these opportunities! I almost wish I would have had a more traditional college experience so I could have participated in things like this. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03530664019624256517noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8373769128375739503.post-9459801312469276142015-11-19T12:13:06.901-08:002015-11-19T12:13:06.901-08:00This is awesome! I love that Washburn offers fun a...This is awesome! I love that Washburn offers fun and beneficial learning experiences such as this. The only change I would make is to add a comma between attending and including. Great story!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com