Monday, October 26, 2015

My homecoing dancing party experience

“ Oh dont you dare look back, just keep your eyes on me. I said your holding back, she said shut up and dance with me.This woman is my destiny, she said oh oh oh, shut up and dance with me.” this is lyric from Maroon 5s song, I felt very excited when I heard this song in the dancing party, because Maroon 5 is my favorite American music group. That was the first time for me to attend dancing party, so I felt little nervous at the beginning. When the music started, everyone danced with music, even though I didn't know how to dance, I still tried my best to follow their steps. I danced with my friend when we heard a very romantic song. At the later part of the dancing party, almost every girls took off their high-heel and continue to dance. It seems everyone feel very excited last night! That will become one of my best American experience!

9 comments:

  1. I don't know if Maroon 5 did a cover of this song, but Shut Up and Dance was made famous by Walk the Moon, not Maroon 5. Also, generally people would call it a homecoming dance rather than a dancing party. Sometimes there are dance parties though.

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  2. This story was really fun to read. There are some spacing errors and you forgot the m in homecoming in the headline. Otherwise, very fun to read!

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  3. I'm so glad you had such a fun night at the homecoming dance! I also found some spacing issues. You also missed a few prepositions and fillers like " everyone danced with [the] music."

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  5. This is a short story. There is a couple of spacing errors. I wouldn't start with a quote.

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  6. Loved this article. It had a lot of personality!

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  7. I'm glad that you added this! It was a great read! Your voice shined through!

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  8. I loved reading about your experience! I think the quote starting off the post could be in a different spot.

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  9. Spacing is a big problem here! Watch out for proper capitalization as well.

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