Tuesday, September 22, 2015

Example of a poorly written article

Is it just me or is this article awful and terrible to follow?


Naked jogging couple leaves 1-year-old alone on beach

Johnathan Manning
Sep 22, 2015 01:10 PM
CAMERON PARISH, LA (KPLC) - A 20-month-old girl was found alone on Holly Beach Tuesday morning (alive or dead?), Cameron Parish Sheriff Ron Johnson said. The parents were located hours later jogging naked down the beach (what?)
The Cameron Parish Sheriff's Office received a report of the 20-month-old child alone on the beach at 10:16 a.m., Johnson said. When deputies arrived at the beach at 10:33 a.m., they found the baby two miles from a Ford Explorer, which was running (how is the Ford Explorer connected to the girl or her parents? What is the significance here?) 
The parents, Cody and Monique Bourgeois, were located nearly two hours later down the beach, Johnson said. Both were arrested and charged with child desertion and obscenity.
Johnson said drug abuse is suspected.
Child protective services has been called to investigate.
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