Blox is so much fun. Olivia Edits 2.0

Adam Vlach was so kind as to let me edit stories on Monday, Nov. 23. He saved some on blox in the folder with articles that needed proofing. I struggled with editing, because I don't know how much we are expected to change, and what is reasonable. I am tempted to move around sentences and phrases to give articles more flow, but those are pretty big changes to make on someone else's work. I had to get out the old stylebook a few times. It was good practice for me. Editing is a skill I need to keep working on after this class is over.